Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Poem: I Am From

I am from books
I am from the internet
I am from fantasy
I am from comfort
I am from new experiences
I am from a world of my own design

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2012 at 10:07 PM

    This needs developing. Especially for credit in Level 5. Please see me for detail

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  2. AnonymousMarch 23, 2012 at 1:05 PM

    Seems to be a little simple but the idea is good, just needs to be shown more. Also change your vocabulary in this poem.
    Michaela Strum.

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