This feels cliche...Hmmmm...were you stuck? I think it might be the word "good" and "feelings" together that were lackluster. The last line seems cheesy, is that intentional? Short pieces are great...if they can blow you away. Are you blown away by this?
This feels cliche...Hmmmm...were you stuck? I think it might be the word "good" and "feelings" together that were lackluster. The last line seems cheesy, is that intentional? Short pieces are great...if they can blow you away. Are you blown away by this?
ReplyDeleteI was really stuck with this one and couldn't think of much. So I made a haiku.
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